After peer reviewing some of the Is Art a waste of time essays I was able to make some helpful suggestions to their work. I was able to make a couple of comments on my peers papers about their ideas in the essay. Is there a thesis? Is it clear and specific? I asked myself and for the most part they were. I also looked at the evidence they had to back their thesis, and I was able to make some comments on whether their evidence supported their claim. As far as their evidence was clear and supported their thesis I thought the people in my group did a good job of that. However, I did find some problems with their organization, I thought some of their papers did not flow particularly well. Overall, I think I was able to help them in the revision process, and I think I gave them enough Ideas where they could eventually write a great paper.