Revision Strategy:

  1. My goal is to create a better argument regarding beauty and how art is related to beauty.
  2. The steps I will take to follow this goal: Continue to question and interpret the sources and the media’s view of beauty, and to gain a better understanding of what Armstrong is arguing
  3. My biggest challenge is incorporating the multi-modal aspect into my essay
  4. I plan to turn to me peers comments if i come across a challenge that is too difficult